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1、會計學(xué)1高考寫作夾敘夾議類作文高考寫作夾敘夾議類作文第1頁/共30頁年份 題目 題型 文體 2005天生我材必有用 諺語格言類 議論文（敘議結(jié)合） 2006南方大學(xué)和北方大學(xué)的比較 表格類 議論文 2007禮物 文字材料類 議論文 （敘議結(jié)合） 2008是否參加集體舞比賽 文字材料類 議論文 2009課程申請 信件類 議論文（敘議結(jié)合）2010小學(xué)課堂比較看圖作文類議論文（敘議結(jié)合）2011扶貧項目申請信件類議論文 （敘議結(jié)合）第2頁/共30頁敘議結(jié)合議論文的分類情況及寫作技巧1、諺語格言類引用名言妙語句型：As a popular/old saying goes/says,Whatever

2、you do, please remember the saying- .If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll definitely learn a lot from it.第3頁/共30頁2、文字材料類、文字材料類2008年9月8日，在山西省襄汾市發(fā)生了一起嚴(yán)重的礦難事故，造成200多人死亡。經(jīng)調(diào)查，事故是由違法生產(chǎn)造成的。據(jù)報道，每年中國的礦難事故造成約5000人喪生，占全世界礦難總?cè)藬?shù)的80%。請用英語簡要敘述以上材料，然后針對事故原因發(fā)表議論，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。寫作情景coal mine accid

3、entsupervision 礦難礦難 監(jiān)督監(jiān)督 第4頁/共30頁寫作步驟1.1.審題審題因為是對過去某事件的敘述，所以要使用一般過去時。在敘述時要做到用詞嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、尊重事實。2.2.寫作思路寫作思路3.3.草擬要點(diǎn)并擴(kuò)展成草擬要點(diǎn)并擴(kuò)展成句句第5頁/共30頁寫作中應(yīng)注意的問題：寫作中應(yīng)注意的問題：1.1.文章應(yīng)符合英語書信的形式；文章應(yīng)符合英語書信的形式；2.2.采用第一人稱寫法；采用第一人稱寫法；3.3.敘事部分應(yīng)使用一般過去時和過去完成時；敘事部分應(yīng)使用一般過去時和過去完成時；4.4.行文要注意故事情節(jié)的連貫性，并符合常理及行文要注意故事情節(jié)的連貫性，并符合常理及邏輯。邏輯。3. 3. 信件

4、類信件類第6頁/共30頁4. 4. 看圖作文類看圖作文類看圖作文類形式比較多樣，有：看圖作文類形式比較多樣，有：單圖（漫畫單圖（漫畫 ）、多圖和表格類。）、多圖和表格類。第7頁/共30頁看圖類作文模板看圖類作文模板1. 交代故事發(fā)生的時間、地點(diǎn)等.2.介紹故事發(fā)展常用的句式.3.發(fā)表議論或看法 .第8頁/共30頁真題例析真題例析假設(shè)你是圖中的男孩，請根據(jù)以下圖畫提供的情節(jié)線索，以 “Sharing Housework”為題，用英文敘述你幫媽媽做家務(wù)的經(jīng)過及感想。 第9頁/共30頁 注意：1.書面表達(dá)必須包括圖畫所表現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。2.詞數(shù)：100左右。第10頁/

5、共30頁審題立意審題立意審題第審題第一一步：確定步：確定文體文體。審題第審題第二二步：確定步：確定寫作目的寫作目的。審題第審題第三三步：確定步：確定寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容。第11頁/共30頁撰寫提綱第一步：確定文章布局。這是一篇夾敘夾議的作文，先按一般記敘類作文的方式交代故事的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果，再寫自己的感想或看法。第二步：列要點(diǎn)：go out with my football（要去踢球）；do some washing, decide to help mum（媽媽要洗衣服，我決定幫忙）； invite me to play football, refuse（朋友來請我踢球，我拒絕了）； hard

6、work for me, mum gets back and praises me, feel proud（媽媽回來表揚(yáng)了我，我很高興）；do something in return談我的感想。第12頁/共30頁低檔作文Sharing HouseworkIn the pictures, you can see that a boy is going out with a football. He is going to play with his friends, but his mother is busy washing clothes. When he finds that his mo

7、ther is busy, he decides to help his mother. So he begins to wash clothes when his mother is away. After some time, one of his friends comes to ask him to play football. But he refuses, he finds it very hard to wash clothes. Finally, he finishes washing all the clothes and hangs them on a line. When

8、 his mother comes back, he is praised by his mother. He feels very happy.From this story, we learn that our parents do everything for us; they are very busy. Sometimes, we can do something to help them a little.第13頁/共30頁高分作文Last Saturday morning, I saw my mother was getting ready to wash some clothe

9、s when I was about to go out with my football. I thought, “ How hard mum is working! She must be very tired.” So I decided to give up my plan and to help mum with the washing. I began to wash the clothes when my mum was away doing some shopping. While I was washing, my friend Tim came to invite me t

10、o play football. I refused and continued washing. It was hard work for me, for I had seldom done such housework. After about two hours, I finished all the washing and hung all the clothes on a line. Later, mum came back from shopping. When she saw what I had done, she was so pleased that she praised

11、 me. I felt proud of myself, too.I think our parents are working hard for us, and we should do what we can to help in return.第14頁/共30頁美文欣賞美文欣賞 Michael是一名美國中學(xué)生，在學(xué)校里選修漢語。他利用暑假到中國進(jìn)修，希望進(jìn)一步了解中國文化。有一天，他看到下面有關(guān)成語的漫畫，不大明白其中的意思。請你用英語把漫畫所表達(dá)的故事和寓意寫成一段短文，向他解釋。 注意：1要求用五句話表達(dá)；2參考詞匯：bump into (撞上)，hoe (鋤頭)第15頁/共30頁1

12、 There was once a farmer who worked very hard every day. One day when he was hoeing in the sunshine, he suddenly heard a low sound “Peng”. He found a rabbit dead by the tree, so he took hold of the rabbit excitedly and had an idea that it was so easy to get a rabbit without any hard work. So he drop

13、ped off his hoe and waited there for more rabbits bumping into the tree. But day after day, there were no more rabbits coming, and what was worse, all his crops were dead. This story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards witho

14、ut hard work. 第16頁/共30頁 2 Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit dead by the trump, so he picked it up happily and thought that it was so easy to get a rabbit without any hard

15、work. From then on, he threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that he got nothing but except his dead crops in the field. The story tells us that if you want to get something,

16、you must work hard for it. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”第17頁/共30頁 請根據(jù)圖畫和所給詞語的提示，敘述某天小明與其媽媽發(fā)生的故事。然后，再根據(jù)此故事內(nèi)容，發(fā)表你自己的感想（自擬）。拓展練習(xí)拓展練習(xí)第18頁/共30頁 參考詞匯：help,stop,knockdown,thefallenoilbottle,straighten,disagree,setagoodexampleto,buildupoursociety注意：不要受所給詞語的限制要求：1要求用五句話表達(dá)；2開頭已給出Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegir

17、lfallover_第19頁/共30頁 One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be,

18、 so she asked him if he had seen the fallen oil and why he hadnt straightened it up but Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.” I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their chil

19、dren, they should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds, meanwhile, they第20頁/共30頁 should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Remember， we live in the society which is a big family for all of us. 第21頁/共30頁真題例析真題例析第22頁/共30頁第23頁/共30頁美文欣賞美文欣賞第2

20、4頁/共30頁第25頁/共30頁Home Assignment 1. 1. 根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇120120150150詞左右的詞左右的短文。注意：短文須忠實描述圖畫內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)短文。注意：短文須忠實描述圖畫內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增減情節(jié)。增減情節(jié)。寫作思路寫作思路1.1.認(rèn)真審圖，確定體裁，認(rèn)真審圖，確定體裁，介紹現(xiàn)象；介紹現(xiàn)象；2.2.提出相關(guān)應(yīng)對措施，提出相關(guān)應(yīng)對措施，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮個人見解；適當(dāng)發(fā)揮個人見解；呼吁人們增強(qiáng)節(jié)水呼吁人們增強(qiáng)節(jié)水意識，完成文章。意識，完成文章。第26頁/共30頁第27頁/共30頁第28頁/共30頁目前，有不少中學(xué)生不做家務(wù)，一些家長認(rèn)為：目前，有不少中學(xué)生不做家務(wù)，一些家長認(rèn)為：中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重，首要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)。再者，中中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重，首要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)。再者，中學(xué)生也不知道怎樣做家務(wù)。而也有人表示強(qiáng)烈反學(xué)生也不知道怎樣做家務(wù)。而也有人表示強(qiáng)烈反對。我報社想就此事與廣大學(xué)生進(jìn)行探討，希望對。我報社想就此事與廣大學(xué)生進(jìn)行探討，希望大家就此用英文給我們踴躍來稿，講述你在家中大家就此用英文給我們踴躍來稿，講述你在家中做家務(wù)的情況以及你的觀點(diǎn)和看法。稿件一經(jīng)采做家務(wù)的情況以及你的觀點(diǎn)和看法。稿件一經(jīng)采納，將在本報刊登。來信請寄納，將在本報刊登。來信請寄第29頁/共30頁