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1、 2014高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（8）附參考范文 (2012湖北孝感一次統(tǒng)考) 請根據(jù)下面提示，結(jié)合你的校園生活中的一個事例，就英語格言“Failure is the mother of success.”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。 In fact，there aren't always bright sunshine and gentle breeze，birds' singing and flowers' fragrant in our daily life.We have so many failures and hardships that someone will b

2、e disappointed and give up the hope of success，but life is what you make it. 注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語； ②除詩歌外，文體不限； ③詞數(shù)為120左右。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________

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7、gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing.That is the message carried in the proverb “Failure is the mother of success”． For example，when I began to learn English，I was slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong

8、 from time to time.My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates.But I didn't give up and kept practising reading aloud English every day.And my teacher gave me a helping hand，getting me right whenever I made an error. In a word，as long as we don't lose heart and keep on trying，we a

9、re sure to go through failure and achieve our aims. *********************************************************結(jié)束 圖表式書面表達(dá)思路與技巧 圖表式書面表達(dá)是常見的一種寫作形式,現(xiàn)筆者結(jié)合下面一則實例,談?wù)勗鯓訉懞眠@類書面表達(dá)。 　　根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容,請以"How?to?Reduce?the?Present?City?Population"為題,用英語為雜志社寫一篇短文,闡述你對這一問題的見解。 建議I? 具體措施:A.?晚婚?B.?一對夫婦,一個孩子????????

10、 目的:減少人口自然增長(人口出生率) 建議II??? 具體措施:嚴(yán)格控制外地人進(jìn)城務(wù)工經(jīng)商?? 目的:減少外地人口對城市的壓力 建議III?? 具體措施:A.?在郊區(qū),建造生活、商業(yè)、文教、衛(wèi)生、娛樂、休閑生活小區(qū)B.?在城外建造衛(wèi)星城?? 目的:吸引城市居民到郊區(qū)和衛(wèi)星城工作和生活 注意: 1)詞數(shù):100左右。 2)參考詞匯:嚴(yán)格控制have?a?tight?control,?衛(wèi)星城?satellite?town 一、?認(rèn)真審題,準(zhǔn)確把握提示要求。 1.?審體裁。準(zhǔn)確把握體裁是寫好一篇文章關(guān)鍵的一步。體裁的形式直接決定著考生用英語表達(dá)信息的途徑和形式,并影響著書面表

11、述語句的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性。 2.?審人稱。根據(jù)體裁要求,要準(zhǔn)確把握人稱的使用。是用第一、二人稱,還是用第三人稱。 3.?審時態(tài)。不同的體裁,其動詞時態(tài)的使用也各有不同。一般情況下,故事、日記等體裁常以一般過去時為主要動詞時態(tài);書信、便條、通知等體裁常以一般現(xiàn)在時為主要動詞時態(tài)。 分析以上實例,應(yīng)以第一人稱的口吻進(jìn)行描寫。從題目要求、表內(nèi)要點以及體裁可知,本文時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主體時態(tài)。 二、?理清表內(nèi)要點,進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。 圖表式書面表達(dá)其主要內(nèi)容常被列在表內(nèi)?？忌紫缺仨毨砬灞韮?nèi)內(nèi)容要點,抓住主要信息進(jìn)行描寫。可先把表內(nèi)所提供的內(nèi)容要點用英語列出,盡量使用一些較高層次的詞匯或短語以及

12、所學(xué)過的句法結(jié)構(gòu)(如定語從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等)進(jìn)行描述。例如上述實例圖表中的內(nèi)容可用英語列出以下幾個短語或句式: (1)?practice?a?policy?of?"Late?Marriage"?and?"One?Couple,?One?Child" (2)?reduce?the?birth?rate (3)?have?a?tight?control?over?country?people?entering?cities?to?do?various?physical?jobs (4)?lighten?the?pressure?on?the?city?caused?by?the?increa

13、sing?population (5)?build?apartment?blocks?with?shopping?centers,?schools,?hospitals,?as?well?as?cinemas?and?theaters?around?us?or?even?build?satellite?towns?in?the?city?suburbs?or?the?counties?round?the?cities (6)?encourage?city?citizens?to?move?there?to?live?and?work 三、?正確使用過渡性詞語,提高文章的連貫性。 過渡性

14、詞語的使用是語言的連貫性得以實現(xiàn)的最常用手段。在句子與句子之間,段落與段落之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪^渡性詞語是非常必要的。例如上述實例,我們可在要點(1)前插入表示時間順序的過渡詞語?first?/?firstly,?在要點(3)前插入secondly,在要點(5)前插入finally。在要點(6)前可以插入表示終結(jié)關(guān)系的過渡短語in?this?way?/?by?this?means。現(xiàn)將中學(xué)課本中應(yīng)掌握的過渡詞語總結(jié)如下: 1.?表示起始關(guān)系的有:?first?of?all,?according?to,?so?far,?as?far?as,?to?begin?with,?in?my?o

15、pinion等。 2.?表示時間順序的有:?first,?then,?later,?in?the?end,?finally,?at?last,?after?that,?since?then,?immediately,?suddenly,?soon等。 3.?表示空間順序的有:?on?the?right?/?left,?on?one?side?of,?at?the?top?/?foot?/?end?of,?in?the?middle?of,?in?front?of,?at?the?back?of等。 4.?表示并列關(guān)系的有:and,?or,?also,?too,?as?well?as,?n

16、either...nor,?not?only...but?also,?either...or,?not...but等。 5.?表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的有:?but,?yet,?however,?while,?on?the?contrary?等。 6.?表示因果關(guān)系的有:?because,?since,?as,?for,?thanks?to,?thus,?therefore,?as?a?result?(of),?one?reason?is?that...another?reason?is?that...等。 7.?表示條件關(guān)系的有:?if,?unless,?as?(so)?long?as,?on?c

17、ondition?that等。 8.?表示讓步關(guān)系的有:?although,?though,?even?if,?in?spite?of,?after?all,?in?fact,?what?(who,?when,?where,?how...)?ever?等。 9.?表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的有:what's?more,?further?more,?besides,?what's?worse,?to?make?the?matter?worse,?also,?still,?on?the?one?hand...on?the?other?hand等。 10.?表示列舉事實的過渡性詞語有:for?example

18、?/?instance,?such?as,?take...for?example,?as?follows,?and?so?on等。 11.?表示總結(jié)性的有:in?short,?in?brief,?in?a?word,?on?the?whole等。 12.?表示過渡性的插入語有:?I?think?(believe,?suppose,?imagine,?guess...),?I'm?afraid,?you?know,?as?is?known?to?us?all,?as?we?all?know?等。 根據(jù)以上圖表式書面表達(dá)題寫作思路,上述實例可整理成文如下: 　　How?to?Reduce?

19、the?Present?City?Population 　　Our?modern?city?is?crowded,?and?to?solve?the?problem,?three?proposals?are?put?forward.?Most?of?the?people?think?that?we?should?first?practice?the?policy?of?"Late?marriage"?and?"One?Couple,?One?Child"?in?order?to?reduce?the?birth?rate.?Secondly,?the?city?governments?mus

20、t?have?a?tight?control?over?country?people?entering?cities?to?do?various?physical?jobs?so?as?to?lighten?the?pressure?on?the?city?caused?by?the?increasing?population.?Finally,?more?and?more?people?suggest?that?we?should?build?apartment?subdivisions?with?shopping?centers,?schools,?hospitals,?as?well?a

21、s?cinemas?and?theaters?around?them?or?even?build?satellite?towns?around?the?cities.?In?this?way,?city?citizens?will?be?encouraged?to?move?there?to?live?and?work.?If?these?three?proposals?are?well?carried?out,?the?population?will?be?greatly?reduced。 ************************************************

22、*********結(jié)束 20萬元會使中國令世人矚目，中國運動員創(chuàng)造了新的奧運會金牌紀(jì)錄。獲金牌的運動員除了得到政府獎金20萬元以外，還會從地方得到更多的獎勵。對此，社會各界反響不一。 贊成 不贊成 1. 運動員為國爭了光 2. 運動員付出了許多辛苦和汗水 3. 獎金有利于中國體育后備力量的培養(yǎng) 1． 運動員是國家培養(yǎng)出來的，為國爭光理所當(dāng)然 2． 得到大量獎金后，有些隊員不會退役 3． 一些企業(yè)趁機炒作，從中獲取廣告效應(yīng) 請你就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡單闡述，并提出自己的一些看法或建議。(120詞左右) 提示詞匯：獎金bonus 參考范文 China has

23、become a shock to the world in Olympic Game 20 the Chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of 200,000, local reward not included, which has become a household talk. Some say the players have won honor for our country after taking great pains, so they deserve it. What's more, i

24、t will benefit the training of future players. Others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country. It will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money. Besides, it's said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their produ

25、cts. I think I will admire the sportsmen who worship not moneny but the spirits of the Olympic Games. **********************************************結(jié)束 作文（***） 目前，家長開車接送孩子上下學(xué)已成為一個普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對此做法褒貶不一。下面是就此現(xiàn)象所做的問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果。 請根據(jù)下列圖表提示，描述被訪者的看法，并就此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點。 注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

26、2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Nowadays it's a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home, which causes a heated discussion．A survey has just been conducted about it，and the findings are as follows． ________________________________________________________________________

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28、______________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Nowadays it's a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and back home,which causes a heated discussion．A survey has just been conducted about it

29、,and the findings are as follows． We can see that half of the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep．Another 30％think children can rest or have meals comfortably in their own cars．About l5％consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's s

30、afety．The rest of them think it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children． However，other people hold different opinions．55％of them believe that it results in more traffic jauls，especially around schools in rush hours．And 30％think that driving kids to and from school wil

31、l undoubtedly add to the parents’burdens in aspects like time，energy and expenses．Still，15％worry that in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents，which does no good to them．In my opinion，we can take buses to school． ************************************************************結(jié)束

32、 7. 假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將于6月26日接待來自于美國某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪問團(tuán)。你受學(xué)校委托，負(fù)責(zé)安排在津的一日活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊Smith 先生寫一封電子郵件，介紹活動計劃并簡要說明理由，最后征求對方意見。 上午與我校學(xué)生座談（話題如校園生活、文化差異等）； 中午與我校學(xué)生共同進(jìn)餐（午餐包括餃子、面條等）； 下午與我校學(xué)生游覽海河。 注意： 1. 次數(shù)不少于100； 2. 可是當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫； 3. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總次數(shù)。 參考詞匯： 海河 the Haihe River Dear Mr Sm

33、ith I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. ___________ 【參考范文】 7.Dear Mr. Smith, I am Li Hua, chairman of the student Union, from Chenguang High School .We’re very glad to know you’ll come to our school on June 26th, and now it’s my pleasure to introduce o

34、ur schedule to you. In the morning, you’ll have a talk with the students of our school. The topic includes school life, the difference between Chinese culture and American culture. Next, we’ll have lunch together at noon and you will eat typical Chinese food, such as jiaozi, noodles. After that, tog

35、ether with us students, you’ll have a trip to the Haihe River in the afternoon. That’s the plan for your visit. If you have any other question, please let me know. Best wishes to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua ***********************************************************結(jié)束 - 7 -