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1、,單擊此處編輯母版標(biāo)題樣式,單擊此處編輯母版文本樣式,第二級(jí),第三級(jí),第四級(jí),第五級(jí),2014/9/19,#,成人高考英語(yǔ)輔導(dǎo)系列,寫(xiě)作技巧,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,一、長(zhǎng)短句,原則,工作,還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句,累死人!寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們,把短句放在段首或者段末,,也可以揭示,主題,。例:,As,a creature,,,I,eat,;,as a man,,,I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisf
2、y the intellectual need of mind,,,they,are in a way quite similar.,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章第一段(開(kāi)頭)用一長(zhǎng)一短,且先長(zhǎng)后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式,定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,二、主題句,原則,國(guó)有,其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成,“,群龍無(wú)首,”,之,感,。,一定,要寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開(kāi)頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無(wú)事,!,To,begin with,,
3、,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam,(主題句)。,Without sufficient preparation,,,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,三、一 二 三,原則,領(lǐng)導(dǎo),講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn),如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚。同學(xué)們看文章也必然要通過(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的,“,標(biāo)簽,”,來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單,只要把
4、下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,1,),first,,,second,,,third,,,last,2,),firstly,,,secondly,,,thirdly,,,finally,3,),the first,,,the second,,,the third,,,the last,4,),in the first place,,,in the second place,,,in the third place,,,lastly,5,),to begin with,,,then,,,furthermore,,,finally,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,6,),
5、to start with,,,next,,,in addition,,,finally,7,),first and foremost,,,besides,,,last but not,least,8,),most important of all,,,moreover,,,finally,9,),on the one hand,,,on the other,hand,10,),for one thing,,,for another thing,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先,原則,寫(xiě)作,時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語(yǔ),有兩個(gè)好處:其一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加,亮點(diǎn),;,其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路
6、,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法,!,例:,I,cannot,bear it,.,I,cannot put up with it,.,I,want it,.,I am looking forward to it.,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,五、多實(shí)少虛,原則,原因,很簡(jiǎn)單,寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,。這里,所說(shuō)的,虛詞,就是指那些比較大的詞,。,比如,我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不,應(yīng)該說(shuō),nice,這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如,generous,,,humorous,,,interesting,,,smart,,,gentle,,,warm-
7、hearted,,,hospital,之類(lèi)的形象詞,。,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,再比如:走出,房間,general,的詞是:,walk out of the,room,但是,小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):,slip out of the,room,小姐,走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):,sail out of the,room,小孩,走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):,dance out of the,room,老人,走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):,stagger out of the room,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,六、多變句式,原則,1,)加法(串聯(lián),),都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些,可以在任何
8、句子之間加,and,,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō):,I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.,如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:,Not only the fur coat is soft,,,but it is also warm.,其它的短語(yǔ)可以用:,besides,,,furthermore,,,likewise,,,moreover,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,2,)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角,),批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,,,再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn),,比較,容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說(shuō)話的時(shí)候
9、,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話,注意二者之間用個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折就夠了。,The car was quite old,,,yet it was in excellent condition.,The coat was thin,,,but it was warm.,更多,的短語(yǔ):,despite that,,,still,,,however,,,nevertheless,,,in spite of,,,despite,,,notwithstanding,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,3,)因果(,so,,,so,,,so,),昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋
10、友,可見(jiàn),講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!,The snow began to fall,,,so we went home,.,更多短語(yǔ):,then,,,therefore,,,consequently,,,accordingly,,,hence,,,as a result,,,for this reason,,,so that,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,4,)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重,),有些,人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意
11、力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句的變形,。,舉例:,This is what I can do.,Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.,同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:,When to go,,,Why he goes away,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,5,)附加(多此一舉,),使用,定語(yǔ),從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是,插入語(yǔ),The,man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.,I,dont enjoy that boo
12、k you are reading.,Mr,.Liu,,,our oral English teacher,,,is easy-going.,其實(shí),很簡(jiǎn)單,同位語(yǔ),要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語(yǔ)從句,-,借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是,whom,or that,關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,6,)排比(排山倒海句,),文學(xué),作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,,一個(gè)個(gè),的,對(duì)偶,句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,,一個(gè)個(gè),的,詞,,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ),如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!,Wheth
13、er,your tastes are modern or traditional,,,sophisticated or simple,,,there is plenty in London for you.,要,想寫(xiě)出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!,寫(xiě)作的七項(xiàng)基本原則,七、挑戰(zhàn)極限,原則,既然,是,挑戰(zhàn)限,,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!,原理:,在,考生,文章,中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上,5,分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是,分詞的一種特殊形式,,分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如:,The weather being fine,,,a large number of people went to climb,the,Western Hills.,Africa is the second largest continent,,,its size being about three times that of China.,如果你能夠?qū)懗鲞@樣的句子,不得高分才怪!,