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1、攻克英語半壁江山 英語滿分作文技巧鑒賞之二 從全國歷屆英語高考滿分作文中獲益（2010年） （作文題目） 　　假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。 　　注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右： 　　2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.). 作文1： I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to lear

2、n Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from JianxinChineseSchool. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the ChineseSchool. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and ki

3、tchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place. 　

4、　Hope you will come here soon! 　　All the best! 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua （滿分理由） 　　本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以‘which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。 作文2： Dear Bob, 　　Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you. 　　I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Ji

5、anxinChineseSchool. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month. 　　Also from this house you can get to your school easily. J

6、ust take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, 　　see you. 　　Best wishes ! 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua （滿分理由） 　　本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實了內(nèi)容，又符合

7、邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。 作文3： Dear Bob, 　　How are you these days? 　　I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one sto

8、p away from JianxinChineseSchool. 　　There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you. 　　Yours, 　　L

9、i Hua （滿分理由） 　　本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。 作文4： Dear Bob, 　　I’m glad to hear from you. 　　Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. 　　The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the JianxinChineseSchool. If you take th

10、e No.11 bus, it is just one stop. 　　It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.

11、 The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month. 　　Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua （滿分理由） 　　本文內(nèi)容詳實，描述具體細(xì)膩，用詞適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)確，如“sui

12、table house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的選擇疑問09高考英語滿分作文 （全國卷I海南、寧夏） 【試題回放】假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準(zhǔn)備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括： 　　1.外出購物 　　2.替房東還書 　　3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 　　2)此事已告知Susan 　　3) 盡快回電 　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Mrs. Wilson

13、, 　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to at

14、tend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua [名師點評] 　　本文屬于提綱式要點作文，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個要點

15、間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。 (北京卷) 　【試題回放】情景作文 　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。 　　注意：詞數(shù)不少于60 　　提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbs April 12 is memorable because

16、 our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the

17、work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 【名師點評】 　　本文是設(shè)計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰

18、，要點連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。 (江蘇卷) 注意： 　　1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。 　　2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計人總詞數(shù)。 　　3.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。 The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. 　　For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse

19、, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies a

20、nd PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse. 　　A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excite

21、d in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically. 【名師點評】本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達(dá)多樣，用詞恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確。不失為一篇滿分作。 （全國卷I） 【試題回放】 　　假設(shè)你是李華，你在報上看到北京電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人“學(xué)中文，唱中文歌”才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學(xué)學(xué)中文，

22、你覺得他應(yīng)去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助。 比賽時間：7 月18日 。報名時間：截止到6月30日。報名地點：北京電視臺 注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3.參考詞匯：才藝大賽-talent show Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I kno

23、w you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for yo

24、u, I would be more than glad to help. From .Yours, Li Hua 　[名師點評] 從整體上說，本文書寫得簡潔明快。語言簡單平實，要點囊括齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。本文的主要特點是讓步狀語從句的使用，最后兩句話，采用了if引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，結(jié)合將來時使用。 （全國卷II） 【試題回放】 假設(shè)你是李華，加拿大一所學(xué)校將于今年暑假組織學(xué)生來你校訪問。其間，Andy Smith將借住你家。請你代表全家寫信給Andy，歡迎他的到來，并告知有關(guān)事宜。信的要點如下： 1.上午：學(xué)?；顒? 2.下午：游覽市區(qū) 3. 晚上：看電視，玩游戲，聊天 注意：

25、1. 詞數(shù)：100左右2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫3. 參考詞匯：安排arrange Dear Andy, I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here. In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll vis

26、it our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on. In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our ci

27、ty like with your own eyes. At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming. Yours sincerely, Li hua [名師點評] 本文行文自然流暢，文章要點齊全，意思表達(dá)真切。詳略得當(dāng)，重點突出。從語言使用的角度來說，不但使用了一些生動的動詞，準(zhǔn)確的名詞，同時為了使本文串聯(lián)自然，又使用了時間狀語為連接詞，

28、將文章按照時間順序敘述完整。 （浙江卷） 【試題回放】 假設(shè)你是李越,你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文,請你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典.根據(jù)下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信. 英漢/漢英詞典新華字典 收詞（字）18,000（英語） 20,000（漢語）10,000 價格52元11元 特點大量例子、用法說明,適合初學(xué)者中國最常用的漢語字典 參考詞匯: · 推薦 recommend （V.） · 英漢/漢英詞典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary （ECCED） · 新華字典 Xinhua Dic

29、tionary （XD） Dear Steve, 　I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries. The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besi

30、des plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD co

31、sts 11 yuan. Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. Yours, Li Yue [名師點評] 本文要完成的是書信的主要部分，因此不需要注意格式，但是不能遺漏要點。本文要點齊全，內(nèi)容完整，詳略得到。介紹的時候，層次清晰，逐一舉例。文章流暢而連貫。有很多關(guān)于詞匯和字典的表述，值得我們積累。 （廣東卷） 【試題回放】假設(shè)你是下圖的李華。請根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息，寫一篇英語作文，描述昨天晚上鄰居看足球賽影響你學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并描寫你隨后與鄰居交涉的過程（如：你向鄰居提出要求，對方向你表示歉意等。）

32、 請嚴(yán)格按照作文地帶所給要求寫作： 1. 詞數(shù)：80-120 2. 可以編寫對話或其它敘述方式描寫你與鄰居的交涉過程. About 9 o'clock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldn't go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the

33、noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor. I knocked at his door and said," Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.' “Oh, I'm really sorry to have disturbed you. We'll do as you say.” My neighbor said politely. 　“Thank you very much..” I

34、said and went back to continue my study. [名師點評] 這篇文章從整體上來看，內(nèi)容完整，要點齊全。在準(zhǔn)確領(lǐng)悟題意的基礎(chǔ)上，用平實的語言，將文章娓娓道來，連貫而流暢。句式搭配長短結(jié)合。文章對對話的描寫，很生動，讓人有種身臨其境的感覺。 【試題回放】 　　實現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。 　　注意： 　　1、對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。 　　2、詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，

35、不計入總詞數(shù)。 　　3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。 　Good afternoon, everyone. 　　The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”. 　　Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. 　　Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children

36、, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will

37、 help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. 　　What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to di

38、fferent opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. 　　Thank you for your listening! 【名師點評】 　　這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿，文中大量運(yùn)用排比句型，不但準(zhǔn)確流暢地表達(dá)出題目中所提供的信息，而且體現(xiàn)出作者熟練運(yùn)用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合句式，將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應(yīng)如何傾聽，則更進(jìn)一步地增強(qiáng)了這篇演說稿的說服力。 佳品傳奇.美文欣賞（輯） 內(nèi)容總結(jié) （1）攻克英語半壁江山 英語滿分作文技巧鑒賞之二 從全國歷屆英語高考滿分作文中獲益（2010年） （作文題目） 　　假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房 （2）第三段中所使用的相同結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合句式，將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致