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1、第十二節(jié)記敘文 記敘文寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 1內(nèi)容完整，脈絡(luò)清楚 寫好記敘文，首先要頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚，明確文章要求寫什么。要對所寫的事件或人物進(jìn)行分析，弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展、一直到結(jié)束的整個過程，然后再搜集、選取素材。一般來說，記敘文包括六大要素，即“六何”“何人于何時何地為何如何做何事”。寫這類文章我們要從六個方面(when，where，who，what，why，how)入手，將題目所要求的全部要點(diǎn)交代清楚。記敘文的目的就是敘述一個經(jīng)過，因此要有頭有尾，自始至終，確保內(nèi)容的完整。 2中心突出，詳略得當(dāng) 在文章的框架確定后，對支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍，應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的

2、需要出發(fā)，分清主次，定好詳略。在寫作過程中我們要突出重點(diǎn)，詳細(xì)敘述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié)，略寫、粗述那些非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。 3語言靈活，準(zhǔn)確生動 記敘文要用具體的事件和生動的語言對人、事、物加以敘述。一篇好的記敘文的語言既要準(zhǔn)確、生動，又要表現(xiàn)力強(qiáng)，這樣才能把人、事、物描寫得具體生動，可讀性強(qiáng)。 好開頭 1Although it happened three years ago，I never forgot the evening party. 盡管那發(fā)生在三年前，我將永遠(yuǎn)忘不了那場晚會。 2Last week we had an amusing experience. 上周，我們進(jìn)行了

3、一次有趣的活動。佳句遞送佳句遞送 好結(jié)尾 1I learnt a lot from it. 從中我學(xué)到了很多。 2This was really an unpleasant trip I had ever had! 這是我曾經(jīng)有過的一次最不愉快的旅行。 好句子 1由于大雨所有的航班都被取消了，乘客們不得不改乘火車。 All the flights had been cancelled because of the heavy rain，so all the passengers had to take the train. All the flights had been cancelled

4、because of the heavy rain；as a result，all the passengers had to take the train. All the flights having been cancelled because of the heavy rain，all the passengers had to take the train. 2一聽見有人呼救，他毫不猶豫地跳入河中。 On hearing someone calling for help，he did not hesitate to jump into the river. Hardly had he

5、 heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation. No sooner had he heard someone calling for help than he jumped into the river without hesitation. 3對于這起交通事故的原因，我認(rèn)為卡車司機(jī)應(yīng)該負(fù)主要責(zé)任。 As for the cause of the accident，I think the driver of the lorry should be to blame. As far

6、 as the cause of the accident is concerned，I think the driver of the lorry should be to blame. As far as the cause of the accident is concerned，I think，it is the driver of the lorry who should be to blame. 題目要求 (江西高考)星光中學(xué)(Xingguang High School)近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學(xué)校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。內(nèi)容包括： 1時間與地點(diǎn)：4月10日

7、，大青山(Daqing Mountain)； 2活動的過程； 3你對于這次活動的評論。佳作賞析佳作賞析現(xiàn)場閱卷現(xiàn)場閱卷 精彩變式 用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式作時間狀語進(jìn)行改寫 用過去分詞短語作伴隨狀語進(jìn)行改寫 用“beof抽象名詞”進(jìn)行改寫 將否定詞置于句首，用倒裝句進(jìn)行改寫 升級五檔作文 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountainclimbing on April 10.Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice

8、day.Having gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain at 800 am，we set out for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.When some fell behind，others would come and offer help.About two hours later，we all reached the top.B

9、athed in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity was of great benefit to us all.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，but it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time！ 假設(shè)你剛剛參加了一次“倫敦游學(xué)”活動，請根據(jù)以下五幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文匯報，在班內(nèi)介紹你們游學(xué)的過

10、程。 注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120； 2匯報的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：大本鐘Big Ben倫敦眼London Eye住宿家庭homestay family演練提升演練提升 Good morning，everyone.It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour to Britain. Thats all.Thank you! 【參考范文】 Good morning，everyone.It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour

11、 to Britain.On the morning of March 27，we arrived at Heathrow Airport where we were warmly welcomed by our homestay families.Soon we went to different families where we had traditional English food and chatted happily.Later we went to Westminster College to attend a presentation about the school.A p

12、rofessor gave us a vivid and interesting introduction and we learned a lot about the college.In the following days we visited some famous scenic spots such as Big Ben and London Eye.We took many photos there.On the last day we had a farewell party at which students from China and Britain gave fantastic performances including songs and dances. From the study tour，we have improved our speaking skills，and weve also got a better understanding of British culture. Thats all.Thank you！