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1、Should mums work outside? 對(duì)比型觀點(diǎn)文章 一 問題導(dǎo)入 提筆三問：________________________________________________________________ 注意點(diǎn)：__________________________________________________________________ 二 錯(cuò)因?qū)? 1.審題不清：最后一點(diǎn)應(yīng)寫你對(duì)話題的看法 _______________________________________________________________________ 2.

2、時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：客觀描述各種觀點(diǎn)應(yīng)用___________！ 3.文章條理性：____________________________________________________________ 4.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)太冗長(zhǎng) 5.表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤 (1)Our class have held a discussion about _____________________________________________ (2)against 詞性__________, 組成句子要_______________________________________ (3)because 引導(dǎo)的是_

3、___________,不能單獨(dú)構(gòu)成一句 改錯(cuò): If mums work outside, there will be no one cooks the meals. 35% students against the opinion. 三 交流學(xué)習(xí) Discuss with your partners and rewrite the structure of this article on your notebook. 四 變式導(dǎo)練 According to the given information, write the structure of this articl

4、e. 最近，你班就 “課間是否要播放音樂” 展開討論. 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息寫一篇短文,陳述討論結(jié)果及你個(gè)人看法,建議. 大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為 部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為 個(gè)人看法 能活躍氣氛,使大腦得到放松,減輕學(xué)習(xí)的疲勞,使大家在快樂的氛圍中做好下一堂課的準(zhǔn)備,能給大家?guī)砜鞓? 課間時(shí)間太短,播放音樂達(dá)不到預(yù)期效果,課間需要的是安靜而不是嘈雜的聲音. ? 參考范文： Recently we have had a discussion about whether mums should work outside. The opinions were divided among us./ Dif

5、ferent students have different opinions. The result is as follows. 65% of the students think mums should work outside. Here are the reasons. First, mums have the right to work outside. Second, they not only bring in more money, but also feel proud of their success in work. Third, they are good for

6、society. However, 35% of the students hold a different view. They think that mums shouldn’t work outside because there will be no one around to do housework, such as cooking the meals and cleaning the house. What’s more, it is too expensive to get someone else to do the housework. As far as I’m co

7、ncerned, we should respect mum’s choices. Whether they want to work outside or not, we are supposed to support them. 最后一段還可以寫出你的明確觀點(diǎn)，如： From my point of view, mums can work outside. Mums are able to do what they want. They can do housework in their free time. Also, we can help mums to do the house

8、work, which will help us to improve our ability. 對(duì)比型觀點(diǎn)作文框架 例1 Para.1 Recently we have had a heated discussion about whether mums should work outside. Different people hold different opinions. The results are as follows. 或 The result is as follows.（結(jié)果如下） Para.2 65% of our class hold the opi

9、nion that mums should work outside. Firstly, … Secondly,… finally, … Para.3 However, 35% of us have a different opinion. They think mums shouldn’t work outside. First, … Besides, … In addition, … What’s more, … Para.4 In my opinion, … = In my view, … = As far as I am concerned, …= From my point o

10、f view,… 例2 Para.1 Recently we have had a heated discussion about whether music should be played during the break. Different people hold different opinions. The results are as follows. Para.2 Most of the students hold the opinion that music should be played during the break. Firstly, … Secondly,… finally, … Para.3 However, some students have a different opinion. They think music shouldn’t be played during the break. First, … Besides, … In addition, … What’s more, … Para.4 In my opinion, … = In my view, … = As far as I am concerned, …= From my point of view,…