一 使用高級(jí)詞匯寫作時(shí) 高級(jí)詞匯 如能運(yùn)用貼切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一兩個(gè) 也會(huì)為你的作文增添色彩 1 標(biāo)新立異寫作時(shí)要恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用一些蘊(yùn)含感情色彩 別人有可能想不到的詞匯 恰當(dāng)?shù)厍笮虑螽?Weallhavethesamechance Weallpossessthesamechance opportunity Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend Wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend 2 短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先多使用詞組 習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞 以增加文采 Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous Icannolongerputupwiththewayhespeakstous Theboyrealizedthedangerandbegantorunaway Theboywasawareofthedangerandbegantorunaway 3 避免重復(fù)盡量避免過(guò)多地使用某一個(gè)單詞 必要時(shí)選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來(lái)代替 Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 二 使用高級(jí)句式 讓句子靚起來(lái)1 恰當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)Aboveall wemustdosomethingtostoppollution Aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution 2 使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句Theaccidenthappenedtheotherday Theaccidentdidhappentheotherday Hedidn tcometothepartybecausehewasverybusy Itwasbecausehewasverybusythathedidn tcometotheparty 3 使用倒裝句WecanonlyimproveourEnglishinthisway OnlyinthiswaycanweimproveourEnglish Wedon tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 使用省略句Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 5 使用感嘆句Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday 6 使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)Becausetherewastoomuchnoise Icouldn tgoonstudying Withthenoisegoingon Icouldn tgoonstudying 7 使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣Ididn ttakehisadvice soIfailedintheexam IfIhadtakenhisadvice Iwouldn thavefailedintheexam It stimeforustotakemeasurestoprotectthewildanimals It shightimethatwetookmeasurestoprotectthewildanimals 答案 havenoidea 答案 madeupmymind 答案 lies 用較高級(jí)句式轉(zhuǎn)換下列句子1 IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 答案 ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish 2 Wecanliveahappylifeonlybythismeans 倒裝 答案 Onlybythismeanscanweliveahappylife 3 Hefellasleep Thelightswerestillon with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) 答案 Hefellasleepwiththelightsstillon 4 Ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 省略句 答案 Ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 5 Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) 答案 Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students 6 Weloveourmotherlandverymuch 感嘆句 答案 Howmuchweloveourmotherland 7 BecauseIwasillthatday Ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 虛擬語(yǔ)氣 答案 Iwasillthatday Otherwise Iwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting 8 Theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout 倒裝句或強(qiáng)調(diào)句 答案 Notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 或 Itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 翻譯句子1 2012 福建書面表達(dá) 只有通過(guò)這種方式 我們才能生活在更加美麗舒適的環(huán)境中 倒裝句 2 2012 福建書面表達(dá) 公園里空氣清新 噴泉美麗 陽(yáng)光燦爛并且伴有鳥兒在歌唱 with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundings Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring withthesunshiningandbirdssinging 3 2012 江蘇書面表達(dá) 在昨天下午的籃球比賽中 蘇華和李江在搶球時(shí)撞在了一起 分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ) 4 2012 陜西書面表達(dá) 經(jīng)驗(yàn)告訴我 不是你得到的東西而是你如何利用它決定了你是怎樣的一個(gè)人 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 Duringthebasketballgameyesterdayafternoon SuHuaandLiJiangbumpedintoeachother tryingtocatchtheball Myexperiencetellsmethatitisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare 5 他說(shuō)英語(yǔ)說(shuō)得如此清晰 以至于大家都能聽得懂 倒裝句 6 是我們做出決定的時(shí)候了 虛擬語(yǔ)氣 SoclearlydoeshespeakEnglishthathecanalwaysmakehimselfunderstoodbyeveryone Itishightimethatwemadeadecision 7 由于開車太快 他在事故中受了傷 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 8 如果人們被說(shuō)服了吃更多的水果和蔬菜 那么死于心臟病的人數(shù)將大大減少 被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) Itwasbecausehewasdrivingtoofastthathegotinjuredintheaccident Thenumberofdeathsfromheartdiseasewillbereducedgreatlyifpeoplearepersuadedtoeatmorefruitandvegetables