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1、第四講巧妙遣詞造句，實現(xiàn)升級策略,(2014高考新課標(biāo)全國卷Ⅱ)一家英語報社向中學(xué)生征文,主題是“十年后的我”。請根據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想完成短文。1．家庭；2．工作；3．業(yè)余生活。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭語已為你寫好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture._____________________________________________________,滿分作文：_______________________________________________wouldliketogivean

2、excellentpictureofmyfuturelife(很好地描繪我未來的生活)intenyears.Tobeginwith(首先)，Iwillmakeeveryefforttotakegoodcareofmyfamily，especiallymyagedgrandfatherbecausehehas_________________________________________________①(奉獻大部分生活養(yǎng)育兩代人)．_________workisconcerned(就工作而言)，Iamdeterminedtobecomeafilm-maker②____________(那種情

3、況下)，Ishalldirectmanygoodmoviesfortheaudience.Duringholidayseasons，Iwillliveinthe,Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.,devotedmostofhislifetobringinguptwogenerations,Asfaras,Inthatcase,countryside，_________________________________________③(在那里空氣新鮮，人們友善)．Iwillenjoysomanyinterestingactivities，

4、____________(例如)fishing,swimmingandvisitingoldfriends.Suchwillbemyfuturelife，oneIhavebeen_____________④(夢想)．,whereairisfreshandpeoplearefriendly,suchas,dreamingof,溫馨提示1.巧用詞匯，giveanexcellentpictureof，tobeginwith，devote...to；bringup；Asfarasworkisconcerned，inthatcase；suchas；dreamof2．①該句是一個含原因狀語從句的復(fù)合句，

5、邏輯嚴(yán)密，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語義連貫。②Asfaraswork...isconcerned的運用使句子緊湊。③定語從句的使用，符合評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對復(fù)雜句式的要求。④倒裝句和定語從句巧妙結(jié)合，與首句相呼應(yīng)，體現(xiàn)了語篇的完整性。,一、遣詞方面：1．措辭要貼切具體試比較下面句子：一個人正在街上閑逛。Amaniswalkingdownthestreet.Amaniswanderingdownthestreet.通過比較可以看出，前一句不如后一句表達得具體、生動。一個詞如果內(nèi)涵越具體，那么在特定的場景中恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂盟?就會收到意想不到的效果。,2．要善于運用短語短語用得好，會給評卷老師留下深刻印象。例如：Whenhew

6、asachild，hewantedtolearneverything.(普通)Whenhewasachild，hehadastrongappetite(胃口)forknowledge.(高級)二、造句方面：1．巧用非謂語動詞運用非謂語動詞，可使文句看起來更簡潔，使語言更加豐富多彩，重點更加突出，增加文采。Icoveredmyears，tryingtokeepthenoiseout，butfailed.,2．巧用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)“with＋名詞/代詞＋現(xiàn)在分詞/過去分詞/形容詞/副詞/介詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，常作伴隨狀語以增加被描繪內(nèi)容的生動性和情感性，使文章讀起來更簡潔明了。試比較：Hesleptallt

7、henightandthewindowwasopen.(一般)Hesleptallthenightwiththewindowopen.(高級),3．巧用復(fù)合句評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中強調(diào)使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和復(fù)雜性，鼓勵考生盡量使用較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)，并且對由此產(chǎn)生的錯誤采取了寬容的態(tài)度。如果恰當(dāng)運用各類從句，就會增加文章的亮點。SoonIbecameoneofthetopstudentsinmyclass，whichgreatlyincreasedmyconfidenceandgotmemotivated.(定語從句),4．巧用倒裝句、感嘆句、強調(diào)句、虛擬語氣句等使用這些句式可使文章化平淡為生動，加強語氣，使評卷

8、老師感受作者的強烈情感，起到升級文章的作用。DisappointedasIfeltattheshabbycampusandthepoorlyequippedclassroom，Ifoundtheteacherspatientandconsiderate.(倒裝句),5．巧用排比等句式如能運用一個個排比句、對偶句、不定式或短語，可使文章增色不少，會給評卷老師眼前一亮的感覺。Thepurposeoftheprogramistomakeourschoolmorebeautiful，tomaketheaircleanerandfresher，andtoturnourschoolintoabetterp

9、laceforustostudyandlivein.,亮點詞句：_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,fu

10、llofwarmth，loveandlaughter；showconcernfor；If；ismorelikelytobe；Otherwise；Meanwhile；aresureto；Since；playsaveryimportantrolein；itisupto；contributeto；Firstofall；paymoreattentionto；Besides；communicatewith；As；Ifwedoso,Ⅱ.巧用遣詞造句，升級下面文章留意一下我們的周邊，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)陪讀現(xiàn)象很普遍。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1．簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；2．分析父母陪讀的原因(2至3個)；3．

11、發(fā)表你對此的看法。注意：1.詞數(shù)：120～150；2．標(biāo)題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,ShouldOurParentsAccompanyUsinStudyingatSchool______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

12、_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,Inrecentyears，manyparentschoosetoaccompanytheirchildreninstudying，whichhasarousedawideconcern.Theseparentsarewillingtoleavetheirhometown，evenq

13、uittheirjobstofollowtheirchildrenintothecampus.Mostofthemrentanapartmentnearbysoastotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

14、__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,Parentsco

15、nsideritnecessarytoofferabetterlivingconditiontotheirchildren.Meanwhile，itenablesthemtokeeptrackoftheirchildren’sacademicperformance.Nevertheless，whattheyhaveignoredisthatitwillgettheirkidsintothehabitofbeingdependent.Thus，theywillneverdeveloptheabilityofself-controlinthefuture.Trustleadstoindependence.Soitseemstomeparentsshouldcreateroomforchildren’sgrowthandstudyinordertoensuretheiroveralldevelopment.,