單擊此處編輯母版標(biāo)題樣式,單擊此處編輯母版文本樣式,第二級,第三級,第四級,第五級,*,寫作中怎樣使用,復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯,一,.,復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),:,1.,使用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài),2.,適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z態(tài),3.,使用不定式,4.,使用過去分詞,5.,使用,V.+ing,形式,6.,使用名詞性從句,7.,使用狀語從句,8.,使用定語從句,9.,使用虛擬語氣,10.,使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句,倒裝句,感嘆句,11.,使用并列句,一、怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：,1.,改變時(shí)態(tài),The bell is ringing now.(,一般,),2.,改變語態(tài),People suggest that the conference be put off.(,一般,),There goes the bell.(,高級,),It is suggested that the conference be put off.,(,高級,),3.,使用不定式,4.,使用過去分詞,He is so kind that he can help me.(,一般,),He is so kind as to help me.,(,高級,),She walked out of the room and many students followed her.(,一般,),Followed by many students,she.,(,高級,),Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.(,一般,),Once seen,it can .,(,高級,),5.,使用,v-ing,形式,When he arrives please give me an e-mail.(,一般,),If the weather permits,Ill come tomorrow.(,一般,),On his arriving/arrival,please give.,(,高級,),Weather permitting,Ill come tomorrow.,(,高級,),Now our school has three teachers.They teach 48 pupils.(,一般,),Now our School has three teachers,teaching 48 pupils.,(,高級,),It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(,一般,),I happened to have met him.(,一般,),6.,使用名詞性從句,The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.,(,高級,),It happened that I had met him.,(,高級,),To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(,一般,),What surprised him is that the girl.,(,高級,),7.,使用狀語從句,I wont believe what he says.(,一般,),If you come back before six oclock,you can go out.(,一般,),The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much.(,一般,),No matter what he says,I wont believe.,(,高級,),You can go out on condition that you come back before.,(,高級,),The meal was so nice that we all.,(,高級,),8.,使用定語從句,The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(,一般,),The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.,(,高級,),I studied Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer at school.(,一般,),The subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,English.,(,高級,),9.,使用虛擬語氣,The ship didnt sink because there were the efforts of the captain.(,一般,),I wasnt invited to the party,so I didnt attend it.(,一般,),If I had been invited to the party,I would have attended it.,(,高級,),But for the efforts of the captain,the ship would have sunk.,(,高級,),10.,使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(,一般,),It was not until 1920 that regular radio.,(,高級,),Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.,(,高級,),Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(,一般,),How glad we were to see the crops and.!,(,高級,),We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.(,一般,),11.,使用并列句,If you go through the gate,youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(,一般,),Go through the gate,and youll find.,(,高級,),I got up late this morning,otherwise I could have caught the early bus.,(,高級,),I got up late this morning.I didnt catch the early bus.(,一般,),The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.,(,高級,),When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(,一般,),四、怎樣運(yùn)用高級詞匯：,As a result,the plan was a failure.(,一般,),She went to Austria in order to study music.(,一般,),Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.(,一般,),The plan turned out to be a failure.,(,高級,),She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.,(,高級,),Thanks to the good weather,our journey.,(,高級,),At the news of her death,he went.,(,高級,),She has trouble in pronouncing the word,.,(,高級,),Whose turn is it to be on duty today?,(,高級,),When he heard she had died,he went pale with sorrow.(,一般,),She cant correctly pronounce the word.(,一般,),Who will be on duty today?(,一般,),怎樣運(yùn)用高級詞匯：,She doesnt like sports.,She cares nothing for sports.,We had to go home.,What we had to do was go home.,五、常見語法錯(cuò)誤分析：,1.,句子缺謂語,1)The building like a match box.,2),He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.,1)A worker of the farm lead us to the field.,2)All the students like books that was written by Lu,Xun,.,2.,主謂不一致，尤其是單數(shù)第三人稱作主語時(shí)，謂語的單復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。,3.,時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤,4.,詞性混用,1)When he came back,he found that his wife has gone to bed.,2)What are you doing this time yesterday?,1)She enjoys study English.,2)If anyone against the plan,please let me know.,5.,介詞誤用,6.,冠詞誤用,1)In my surprise,he has got the first prize.,2)He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.,3)Dont read under the sun.,1)We elected Li,Hua,the monitor of the Class Five.,2)Once upon a time,there was an one-eyed lion.,3)The history is actually a very interesting subject,.,7.,名詞的數(shù)混淆,8.,動(dòng)詞用法錯(cuò)誤,1)It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.,2)There is always traffic jam.,1)Where are you come from?,2)When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there waiting for me.,3)He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.,4)The accident was happened in 1999.,9.,習(xí)慣用法錯(cuò)誤,1)The actor in this movie is very beautiful.,2)I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.,3)The reason is because he does not know what to do next.,六、學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞：,1.,表示平行、對等或選擇關(guān)系,and，bothand,as well as,together with,neithernor,also,not onlybut also,eitheror,as well.,2.,表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,but,yet,however,nevertheless,(,然而,),in spite of,although,otherwise,while,after all,.,3.,表示