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1、第十四節(jié)建議信 1結構分析 首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。 主體段落：通常首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后再寫需要改進的地方或針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。 尾段：對提出的建議進行總結。 2時態(tài)的使用：以一般現在時為主，同時兼顧其他時態(tài)。 佳句遞送 好開頭 1Im glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to appreciate art well. 很高興收到你的來信，詢問我如何很好地欣賞藝術。 2I am glad to know that you are going to enter

2、 college and it is my great pleasure to give you some suggestions of choosing your major. 我很高興得知你將進入大學并且很榮幸能就專業(yè)選擇方面給你提一些建議。 3Concerning your request，I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit. 對于你的請求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建議。 好結尾 1In my opinion，you would be wise to accept his advice. 依我之見，采納他的建議是您的明智

3、之舉。 2I do hope you will consider my suggestion. 真心希望你能考慮我的建議。 3I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. 我希望這些建議對你有所幫助，并且樂于和你就此事進行進一步的交流。 好句子 1In the first place，I would also recommend a balanced diet. 首先，我會推薦均衡飲食。 2Why not d

4、rink a little，exercise，stop smoking and eat more fruit and vegetables? 為何不少喝點酒，參加鍛煉，不抽煙，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？ 3I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning your fatness. 我覺得就你的肥胖問題表達我的觀點可能會很有用。 4閑暇之余，你可以有很多地方休閑娛樂。 In your spare time，you can enjoy yourself in many places. There are many plac

5、es for entertainment where you can enjoy yourself in your spare time. Many places for entertainment will offer you a chance to enjoy yourself in your spare time. 佳作賞析 題目要求 你(王偉)的好友(李磊)最近經常和一些朋友去網吧、游戲廳玩，有時甚至曠課。請你根據下面要點給他寫一封建議信。 1朋友在人的一生中起著重要作用； 2真正的朋友不會讓你去做壞事； 3所以我們要明辨是非，慎重交友?，F場閱卷 精彩變式 用非謂語動詞短語作原因狀語進

6、行改寫 用強調句型，強調句中加黑部分 強調句中謂語動詞hope 升級五檔作文 Dear Li Lei， I am writing to you because I think I have something really serious to communicate with you. I have noticed that recently you often go to the Internet Bar and the Game Center together with several friends.Sometimes，you even didnt have classes in or

7、der to play with your friends.Being one of your best friends，Im very worried about you.Friends play an important part in ones life.It is our friends that we have to choose carefully.Real friends will never ask us to do something wrong.I dont think the friends around you are your real friends. Its hi

8、gh time that you should think about the problem I have mentioned above.And I do hope you will make a wise decision soon. Yours， Wang Wei 演練提升 假設你是李華。近日，你的筆友Jack聽說你們學校正在開展“建設節(jié)約型社會(Construction of an energysaving society)”的主題活動，發(fā)來郵件請你介紹一下你對該活動的看法和建議。請你結合以下要點，用英語給Jack回一封電子郵件。 1不浪費糧食和紙張； 2盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋；

9、3畢業(yè)生將書贈給低年級同學循環(huán)使用； 4其他建議。 注意：1.詞數：120150； 2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 參考詞匯：方便筷disposable chopsticks 【參考范文】 Dear Jack. Glad to receive your email. As you know，there has been an activity of“Construction of an energysaving society”in our school recently.I think it is of vital importance because our society is fac

10、ing the increasing danger of lack of energy. Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity. In my opinion，therere many things we can do.In our daily life，we shouldnt waste any food or paper.It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides，I think the g

11、overnment should make it a rule that those used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school，because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled. Actually，there are quite a lot that we can easily do：for example，try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars，etc.All of these will definitely help to construct an energysaving society. Yours， Li Hua