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1、中考英語作文專項訓(xùn)練 一、考點分析： 在中考中，寫作占20分，分值所占比例大，而寫作考察學(xué)生的英文綜合運用能力，因此非常關(guān)鍵。 【中考英語作文的評分標準】 比較為學(xué)生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4”結(jié)構(gòu)，即： （一）內(nèi)容： 　　7-8分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。 　　5-6分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達基本清楚、但不夠完整。 　　2-4分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達不夠清楚、有些離題。 　　0-1分：文不對題，表達不清。 （二）語言： 　?、僭~數(shù)：每少5個字扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個別單詞、詞不成句不給分。 　?、谄磳懀好垮e扣0.5分，同一錯誤

2、不重復(fù)計數(shù)。 　　③語法：同② 　?、軜它c符號、大小寫：每兩處錯誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過1分。 （三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)： ①內(nèi)容充實、上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達準確、無語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多 見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語者，可給3-4分。 ②內(nèi)容充實、不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語規(guī)范、表達準確、無或少見語法錯誤；詞匯和句型 句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語者，可給2分。 　　③一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語言累計得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。 ④內(nèi)容和語言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表達，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié) 構(gòu)分。 　　⑤通篇句型

3、、句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。 二、寫作中常見問題： ①內(nèi)容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達能力不強，表達生硬呆板，甚至中式英語翻譯思維。 ②議論過多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，把議論當成的作文的重點，常常跑題。 ③句式單一，都是簡單句，缺少復(fù)合句。 ④結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，思維跳躍，文章缺乏條理性。 ⑤連詞的使用較少，并且使用單一，句子之間的連接很生硬。 ⑥文章平淡，無亮點短語和句型，連接詞等。 三、寫作技巧分析： 【高分作文的必備元素】 1. 書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。 2. 不出現(xiàn)語法，拼寫，標點，大小寫等錯誤。 3.

4、 文章字數(shù)最好控制在80-100字之間，切記過長或者過短，8-10句即可。 4. 要點齊全。為了避免遺漏要點，可以將題目中給出的要點標注出來。 5. 開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。 6. 連接詞使用恰當，不重復(fù)，上下文有連貫性，使之自然成一體。 7. 應(yīng)用詞匯: 高級詞匯的合理使用、同義詞的變化使用、短語的恰當使用。 8. 多用亮點短語，并且使短語多樣性，盡可能使用多種表達方式。 比如：同一個意思“幫助”，假如你就用一個動詞“help”，顯得詞匯貧乏。如果能在作文中不斷 地變換方式，用help、give sb. a hand、do sb. a favor、be in

5、 need of 等以表達“幫助”，表達更靈 活生動。 9.句式多樣性，可適當使用陳述句，疑問句，祈使句及感嘆句，強調(diào)句，倒裝句，定語從句， 狀語從句，賓語從句等。 10. 能夠恰當使用諺語、格言、名言等給文章添彩。 11. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣性,主動被動交叉用，原級比較級靈活用，非謂語動詞恰當用。 12.靈活使用萬能句型，增添文章亮點。 四、中考經(jīng)典范文解讀： VII. Writing (作文) （共20分） 94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I want to invent _____” (以“我想要發(fā)明________

6、”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格) （注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補充完整。 2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。） The following is for reference only. (以下表達僅供參考) ? It can be used to… ? It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to… 范文精選一及點評： I want to invent a flying car It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and seri

7、ous air pollution in big city. It is a must to have a plan to improve the serious condition. I get an idea to design my own flying machine like a car which can drive well in the street as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What’s more, when it is moving ,it can transfo

8、rm the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution ,and even save the natural resource. Bright idea can only be achieved with the determinat

9、ion and courage. I believe my idea will turn a new leaf of future life. 精彩亮點分析： 亮點一：高分短語 亮點二：it is a must 活用高頻詞 亮點三：定語從句描述自己設(shè)計的汽車 亮點四：高分短語 亮點五：be of great use 名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端 亮點六：被動語態(tài)，豐富句式 亮點七： turn a new leaf of future life 翻開未來生活的新篇章 ------------------------------------- 范文精選二及點評： I want to inv

10、ent a time machine As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays, I would rather learn about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learn from a textbook. That’s why if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my

11、first choice. The most important usage of my time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty. As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I can not only try different ways of studying but communicate

12、with people from different countries as well. Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past, I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out. 精彩亮點分析： 亮點一：定語從句修飾對學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的生活 亮點二：用would rather … than … 表達學(xué)生的意愿 亮點三：用if條

13、件狀語從句表達主題 亮點四：be famous for 因…而著名 亮點五：not only … but … as well 不但…而且… 亮點六：用動名詞詞組做主語 亮點七：用idiom突出歷史的重要性 亮點八：定語從句表達學(xué)生的期待 ----------------------------------- 范文精選三及點評： I Want To Invent A Family Doctor Robot I want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness witho

14、ut going out of their home. As far as I’m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons: First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations. Furthermore, ho

15、spitals today are always filled with patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want. In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society. 精彩亮點分析： 亮點一：全文巧用“first,

16、 furthermore, in short” 等連接詞，把家庭機器人醫(yī)生的好處寫的非常清晰，讓閱卷老師一目了然。 亮點二：全文采用了定語從句、狀語從句、并列句等多種長難句，為文采分增色不少。 亮點三：文中出現(xiàn)了“extremely, make contribution to” 這些超綱單詞及詞組，恰到好處地強調(diào)了家庭機器人醫(yī)生的重要性，且為文采再次進行潤色。 VII. Writing (作文)（共20分） 94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’m ready”(以“我準備好了”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標題符號不占格)

17、你對明天一定有著美好的憧憬，為此，你已經(jīng)做好了哪方面的準？請結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷或特長等，選取一個角度具體談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫鰷蕚涞摹? （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。） The following is for reference only.(以下內(nèi)容及供參考) Independent be good at... Responsible take part in... Hardworking it helps me to... 范文精選一及點評： I'M READY Summer holiday

18、 is coming, all my classmates are preparing to have a wonderful holiday, including me. I am ready to go to Bei Daihe, the seaside holiday resort, for swimming and having a good time on the seaside. I can not only appreciate the beautiful scenery but also breathe the fresh air. It looks good, isn't i

19、t? Before I go to the seaside, I think it's important to take something useful with me such as sunglasses, bathing suit, suntan oil and my homework and so on. Well, the last I want to carry is some medicine, which can keep me safe. After that I should plan where I stay, play and how to get there

20、. In conclusion, I do believe I can do it perfectly and enjoy myself. 精彩亮點分析： 亮點一：非謂語動詞including的巧妙使用。 亮點二：同謂語的恰當使用，說明目的地是一個海濱度假圣地。 亮點三：not only … but also … 表達度假不僅可以欣賞美景還可以呼吸新鮮空氣。 亮點四：運用反義疑問句，加強語氣。 亮點五：運用定語從句，修飾medicine。 亮點六：巧妙使用“do“這個詞，加強語言表達力度。 ----------------------------------- 范文精

21、選二及點評： I'M READY ? ?Are you a person who always likes to get ready for everything? Do you often make a full preparation for something before doing? I am such a guy due to an unforgettable experience. I still remember it was a final exam, I had been playing all day before it, believing that I

22、am clever enough to get a high score, however, the result was very awful. From then on, I know if you want to succeed, the most important thing is to get ready for it. ?? Therefore, during the last whole year, I devote all my time to reviewing my lessons. The only reason is that I know there isn

23、’t a lucky dog in the world, and on the way to success, hardworking is the key. 精彩亮點分析： 亮點一：疑問句開頭，引發(fā)閱讀興趣 亮點二：過去完成進行時的使用使文章意思表達的更清晰 亮點三：分詞做伴隨狀語，使文章檔次提升 亮點四：be +adj.+enough to do sth. 足夠…做某事 亮點五：條件狀語從句的使用 亮點六：不定式做表語 亮點七：devote one’s time (in)to…把…奉獻給… 亮點八：表語從句的使用 五、連接詞匯總： 1. 表起始:first of

24、 all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as等 2. 表時間: first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally等 3. 表空間: on the right/left, to the righ

25、t/left of, on one side of… on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等 4. 表因果:for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…,since,as, as a result (of),so，thus，therefore，as a result 等 5. 表轉(zhuǎn)折:but, yet, however, after all, i

26、n fact, while, instead of, unlike, although, after all等 6. 表列舉:for example, such as, like, in other words, and so on等 7. 表推進:what’s more, furthermore,on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides,moreover…等 8. 表總結(jié):generallly

27、speaking,in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all等 9. 表示目的：for this purpose，for this reason，so that，in order that，so as to，in order to… 10. 表示讓步：although，though，even though/if，no matter wh— 六、從句在寫作中的使用： 1. 不用說……? ?It goes without saying that … = （It is） needless to say （that） … 　　=

28、It is obvious that … 　　例：不用說早睡早起是值得的。 　　It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 2. 在各種……之中，……? ? Among various kinds of …， … /= Of all the …， … 　　例︰在各種運動中我尤其喜歡慢跑。 　　Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 3. 就我的看法……；我認為…… 　　In my opinion, … 　　= To my min

29、d, … 　　= As far as I am concerned, … 　　= I am of the opinion that … 　　例：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 　　就我的看法打電動玩具既花費時間也有害健康。 4. 隨著人口的增加……? ? With the increase/growth of the population, … 　　隨著科技的進步……? ? With the advance of science an

30、d technology, … 　　例：With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass. 　　隨著臺灣經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展許多社會問題產(chǎn)生了。 5. ……是必要的 It is necessary （for sb.） to do / that … 　　…… 是重要的 It is important/essential （for sb.） to do / that … 　　…… 是適當?shù)?It is proper （for sb.） to do / that …

31、 　　……是緊急的 It is urgent （for sb.） to do / that … 　　例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean. 　　It is proper that we （should） keep the public places clean. 　　我們應(yīng)當保持公共場所清潔。 6. 花費??spend … on sth. / doing sth. … 　　例：我們不應(yīng)該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時間。 　　We shouldn't spend too much time on someth

32、ing we aren't interested in. 7. how 引導(dǎo)的感嘆句 　　例：那至少可以證明你很誠實。 　　At least it will prove how honest you are. 8. 狀語從句 　　A）如果你不……，你就會……? ? If you don't …， you'll … 　　例︰If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance. 　　如果你不堅持努力工作，你就會失去這次機會。 　　B） 如此 ……，以至于……? ???so … that … 　　例：At that mome

33、nt, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 　　當時，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。 　　C） 每當我聽到……我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear …， I cannot but feel excited. 　　每當我做……我就忍不住感到悲傷。 Whenever I do …， I cannot but feel sad. 　　每當我想到……我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of …， I cannot but feel nervous. 　　每當我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet

34、 with …， I cannot but feel frightened. 　　每當我看到……我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see …， I cannot but feel surprised. 　　例：Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad. 　　= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad. 　　每當我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。

35、9. 賓語從句 　　我認為，……??/ 我認為……不? ?I think / I don't think that … 　　我想知道是否……? ?? ?? ?? ?I wonder whether … 　　例：He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club. 　　他認為我不應(yīng)該阻止他參加這個俱樂部。 10. Since + S + 過去式， S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。 　　例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 　　自從他上高中，他就一直很用功

36、。 專項練習(xí)（practice） I．Writing(作文) (共20分) 99．Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。) 提示：自我保護是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請談?wù)勀阍谏钪性鯓舆M行自我保護(可 結(jié)合生活中的某一個情景或具體事例，如：面對災(zāi)難如何自救，如何預(yù)防受騙或侵 害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。 Phrases for reference(以下短語僅供參考)： ask…for

37、help calm down in danger prevent．．．from (注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。) _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________

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39、_______________________________________________ II. Writing (作文) (共20分) 94.Write at least 60 words about the topic “ This time next year“ (以“明年此時”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格) 你是否想象過，明年此時，你的生活會發(fā)生怎樣的變化？你對自己或他人有怎樣的期待？你能為此做些什么？） （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。） The following sentence patterns are

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42、____________________________________________ III.Writing (作文): (共20分) 99. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根據(jù)所給情景寫一封 不少于60詞的信) 　　Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think?

43、Try to offer her some advice. (假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因為過于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請給她寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給她一些建議。) 　　(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)? _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ __________

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